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Eve Martelli. Sailor Hephaestus. The MYTHOS Organization.

Strengths: Uhm, first of all: THANK YOU FOR MAKING AN ART CHARACTER THAT IS NOT RETARDED. OH MY GOD <3333333+++ :D

Anyway, this character was just phenomenal: extremely believable, interesting and unique. The profile was extremely well written – it was a fun read from beginning to end. Everything was just very, very good. Hot uniform, too. There’s too much good that I could comment on, and I couldn’t think of any suggestions to make, because you’ve done a wonderful job of planning for future abilities and past-life stuff.

Verdict: Accepted.