Quotes directly from the application will be in this color. My comments will be in black.

 

Isabel Albin. Sailor Hera. The MYTHOS Organization.

 

I’m just going to cover the big boys so we get this out of the way fast. XD

 

Skills

I totally loved the bath thing. Very nice. <3

 

Signature Attack

This is awesome. I love the concept of being bound to the wind or to the ground to create different outcomes, and I like how you limited the positive side of this ability. The only problem is you didn’t describe the sparkley poo poo magical girl attack sequence. XD;; If you could do that, that’d be peachy. And also define a length of time for this ability to last before it wears off.

 

Special Skills

 

Eyes of the Queen

LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS. LOVE. The only thing it needs is a bit more limit for now (it will be made stronger later) – maybe the eyes can’t stray too far from Hera, and as they get further away, the clearness of the image she gets is blurred. By the way: LOVELOVELOVE.

 

Cloak of Fog

I also loved this. XD

 

Verdict: Accepted! Just need a few little tweaks that you can do whenever. XD