Quotes directly from the application will be in this color. My comments will be in black.
Strengths: Everything about Noah is great. You’ve got an impressive and amazingly detailed personality here. His mood cycle was a very nice touch, and the detail you put into explaining it and how it works was great. What we’ve got here is another great example of a character whose relevance to god and sphere are not based on the most obvious things: rather than placing emphasis on mimicry as a major part of Noah’s persona, it is added, but more emphasis is placed on birds and mirrors.
You did a great job of handling being a Rebirth, which would probably end up being challenging for most. I love his skills, especially the “sparkle sparkle”, and his signature attack.
What I Loved: The Pandora, the signature attack, the personality (especially his cycle)
Suggestions: The profile webpage has a lot of spots where symbols, quotes and apostrophes are changed into question marks. Just letting you know. 8D
Verdict: Accepted.